Hello friends this my first time writing please read and comment, I want to know where am faulting. Thanks

Story Plot
Steve a wealthy young man designs a robot he sends to the past to save his brother Ken who died in a car accident, time changes and reveals ken is actually a step-brother. Back in the present Steve now is faced with the challenge of Ken been is Archenemy who posseses his wealth. Steve is last option is to correct the mistake he has caused at the cost of his health.

Story Begins Here





It was Steve and Green having a sword martial art practice in the martial art room, Green overpowered Steve and pointed her wooden sword tilted downwards towards him who lied on the floor facing up, she retreated her sword as he stood up.
"Never underestimate a woman" said Green who blinked her eyes smiling,
"hm well said" replied Steve as he walked out of the martial art room.
Vooooooooom went the car after been hit by an incoming truck from the left sending it into a state of somersaulting of three rolls, the car was gruesomely smashed. The ambulance arrived to take out the victim,
"shit it's Ken Bruger" said the medical personnels who toke Ken out of the car as the sirens gave an alarming sound. "Broken ribs spinal cord damage fractured shoulder bones" said the medical doctor who attended to Ken who was on life support at the
hospital.

It was the News flash on TV having the News headline with the broadcaster as he spoke "Ken Bruger was involved in a fatal car accident and is declared dead" with the accident's scene displayed on TV. Journalists surrounded Steve holding microphones,
asking "Steve Bruger what do you have to say concerning the unexpected tragedy of your brother", Steve gave no reply and looked at the sky, "do you knowanything that could have caused his death" asked one of the journalists, "its unfortunate this happened
I can't take this " he replied while he closed his eyes with his palm as tears ran down his face.
All this Steve remembered while he stood looking at Ken's photograph in his room with a glass cup of a drink held with his left hand
Green walked in seeing Steve looking at the photo,
"you look at that all the time" she said,
"its been five years since the death of Ken i dream of him every night my love for him as a brother i cannot comprehend" he replied still looking at the photo.
His phone rang in his pocket, he takes it out with his right hand and answers it.
"hello deji, what do you have for me?" he asked. He stood for a minute and then turns backward to face Green, "I got that" he said, and drank a little of the drink he held
ending the call.
"get the documents ready" he said to Green with a look of confidence,
"I believe it's good news" she replied and walked out of the room.
At Bruger Corp, a car came in, two men in black coperate clothing came to the car and opened the back doors each, Steve and Green steps out of the car from the separate sides of the car,

Steve clothed in a black coperate outfit and Green clothed in a black coperate cloth having a skirt walked into the building with Green by his left holding a chrom coloured briefcase.

Steve, sitted on his office chair with a glass desk in front of him. He placed his palm on the desk's surface and it displayed "Welcome" with a computerized woman's which said "welcome to Bruger's Corp".
"thank you thank you emily" said Steve,
"I want to see the latest news report" he inquired.
A news report began to display on the desk, the broadcaster spoke "the federal government, has decided to open up a platform for physicists to show their capability of designing and implementing new strategic means of strengthing the economy of the nation"
while the news reporter still spoke, Steve wouldn't wait for the completion of the information, "emily" sharply he said inhaling deeply as he closed his eyes slowly with his palms on the desk's surface,
"yes sir" replied emily,
he turned to look at Ken's photo on his desk,
"am still expecting a word from you sir" emily said gently.
Deji a man dark in complexion walked into the office, "Doctor Steve, you always wanted this opportunity and now its come, what will you do about it?" he asked Steve who still starred at the photo.
he turned to look at Deji "it's said that when the window of opportunity appears, don't pull down the shade" he said, with his eyes on Deji. He looks at the desk surface,
"emly" he called out,
"yes sir, am still with you" emily replied softly,
"I want you to create a new file for our upcoming project" he instructed,
"project name sir?" asked emily,
Steve looked at Deji and smiled raising his eyebrows as high as possible,
"proooject 1-0-1" he answered and he relaxed on his chair.
At the park was a man sitted on a bench who read a newspaper with a glass on his face, while he sat quietly a man clothed in black coperate outfit walked up to him and sat by his right.
"Good morning Doctor Johnson, I bring you good news" he said,
"Good morning James" Johnson replied as he closed his eyes slowly and inhaled deeply with his closed lips widen,
"The Federal Government is giving out an opportunity for physicists all over the country to show what we are capable of doing" James said,
Johnson opened his eyes and kept it focused on the newspaper, his closed lips were back to normal.
"It is well known, that among the scientists we have in the country, only a few are physicists" James said.
Johnson closed the paper, looked forward and gave a sigh with his shoulders dropped down.
"And with Doctor Steve among the competitors, it will not be easy" Johnson said,
James turned to him and asked "then what will you do about it?",
"Move fast.....speed is a main advantage over large competitors" Johnson replied and turned to James.
"over my years with you as your personal assistant, that has always been one of your strategy" said James.
Johnson gave a tap on James's left shoulder,
"Get ready, we gat some work todo" said Johnson.
At Bruger's lab was Steve in a black outfit having a black top, who stood and rested his hands in front of a round computerized table that projected the modelling of a device in the air in blue,
"it's been three weeks since we started this project, and we are near completion" said a woman who stood opposite Steve with a lab coat on her, with her hands in her pocket,
"and with the deadline given to us by the government, we are out of time" said a man on lab coat in the lab, who walked towards the table to join the conversation and shaked his head towards the right inhaling and back to the left exhaling.
Steve took his hands off the table, folded his arms and asked the woman "whats holding us back?" tilting his head
"we ought to be done by now, i mean we are just dealing with a proto-type here" he said further, massaging the back of his neck with his left and his right hand held out towards the woman.
The woman sighed raising her eye brows as she looked downwards at the projection of the model, and said "we have a problem here sir",
she looked straight at Steve dropping her eye brows.
Steve face got blank as he heard her statement, "what could be the problem ?" he asked, looking heavenward as he breath in deeply,
the woman tapped the surface of the projection device, she said to Steve who looked downward at the modelling as it enlarged and displayed red "you see that, thats the problem, the energy produced will go unstable, and that we don't need",
"else it could go destructive and be a threat to humans" said the man who had walked in.
Steve with his lips folded in, his eyes narrowed towards the modelling and his hands on the table he said "I never expected to have a problem here",
"my calculations were correct, no flaws, no pit holes, hmmm" Steve said further, standing erect with his hands in his pocket after his speech.
"I don't have enough time to make more research on this" Steve said, now rubbing his chin with his left hand.
In his mind he asked gazing at the mercury fluroscene used in lighting the lab that made it a little dark,
"what will he do, if if was here" looking at Ken in his mind's eye.