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Well I would have preempted you, if I didn't read to the very end. I would sadly be critical of your flowy choice of words though it is in itself refreshing. It is sufficient to assume that most youths have little or no form of lexical dexterity in their choice of words.

To be fair, you did well. But it can get better. Be more descriptive in build up of the characters and allow room for funny anecdotes. Since this is your first foray into writing, I would advice you spend time on proof reading too.

When writing, have it in the back of your mind, that you are an entertainer as well as been an information disseminator. What ever genre, you want to explore, be original. Keep your fans guessing. Play with words and their minds. Thrill them with series of an unexpected events. Tie events well to time which you did with the covid-19 in addition to place so one can relate. The best writers can attest to the fact that writing is hard work and should be embraced as such. Do your hard work for the reading pleasure of your fans. Improve your lexical prowess.

Many thanks to you! I'm deeply humbled. One won't appreciate the work of Publishers, until one discovers that you could proofread your work over and again without spotting a lurking typographical error. Regardless, I'll work on that.

The discreet nature of locations was a conscious decision ( for the fear of bloggers, who copy and paste). It truly did occur just this morning, although, I had to embellish the title with a fictional character. I felt a burning drive to vent it off my mind. Albeit, I'm looking forward to expressing myself more in this form of Art. More so, developing pertinent skills too. Feel free to refer me to helpful sources.

Above all, thanks again.

You are welcome. Vent that passion